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My Dad Can Fly
by miriclaire
My Dad told me how he used to fly in his dreams and loved the feeling so much. But to me, my Dad is still flying....this is to be read SLOWLY and SLowly....

My Dad can fly.

He flies in his dreams.

And no matter how strange that seems,

He knows it is true.

I know it is, too.

And so do some other few.

In his dreams he sped, he sailed, he soared;

Wherever he led...

he was adored.

My dad.

My Dad could fly,

though he wouldn’t tell just anyone

how that magical deed was done,

you can rest assured,

no matter how absurd,

he’ll be soaring ‘ere this night is done.

This night.

If we look to the sky

We’ll see my guy.

My Dad,

as he flies.

And the secret to his secret is this:

If one can fly,

one can never miss...

or be missed.

With his watchful eye,

tending over us all....

My Dad...

…My dad

The be All and End all

To me.

Shhh!

Watch.

Watch the skies

Watch...

You’ll see him pass by.

Reader Reviews
Review by greg1 at 03/12/08 05:05:44
good stuff :)
Rating: 5
Review by camilla at 11/03/07 20:08:47
Hey, I know that Dad! He is awesome to say the least. That is a beautiful poem about him and I loved reading it several times.
Rating: 5
Review by joerhea at 08/26/07 12:12:20
I wish I looked at my dad as you look at yours. I get how much you love your father. He soars for all of us to see. Your dad, could have taught my dad a thing or two. Excellent work!!
Rating: 5
Review by captainbird at 06/18/07 20:08:58
i hope he's still flying
Rating: 5
Review by lisamarie at 06/13/07 07:07:51
Great poem very symbolic of his real life as he is everything to everyone and can do just about anything!!!!
Rating: 5
Review by aphrodite at 06/11/07 21:09:58
Hi, your dad seems like mine, perfect and can do no wrong,, they threw away the mold after they made fathers like ours, good poem, ideas flowed and the rhyme scheme wasn't bad. thanks for sharing and keep on writing Aphrodite63
Rating: 5
Review by mysteriam at 06/06/07 14:02:03
nice
Rating: 5
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